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Is the & supposed to be on the pubic area of the girl? That was the first thing I saw on 2 and 4.

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It wasn’t planned. But my editor thought it looked like pubic hair and now others are commenting on it and a couple of people have seen a uterus so it will definitely be changed :)

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I can’t not see it now! Great point

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That’s exactly what my editor and i have been saying. We can’t unsee it!

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I wouldn't take the chance. most people won't see it (I didn't!) but those that do won't stop seeing it and tell others as a "have you realised", or some people might think is on purpose, which is almost worst (specially in the context of the vile debate about genitalia and womanhood)

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Yes exactly! We’re changing it.

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First of all, congratulations ! I can’t wait to read this book. I voted for #3 because I think that’s the best text layout, but I prefer the other colors.

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Thank you!! To clarify, you like the “and” rather than the ampersand but you like the purple colors better?

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So excited for you!

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Thank you Charlotte ❤️❤️❤️

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